ISSUE 6 - MAY 1975

cover size 210 x 148 mm (A5)
This is Voices 6, and our total output covers about 300 pages. There have been more than 200 separate pieces in these 6 issues, written by more than 80 writers, the overwhelming majority of whom have never had work published previously. The quality varies greatly of course: some of the pieces (and at this point it would be invidious to select examples) are of high poetic or literary merit; others are not. The whole purpose of "Voices" is not to perpetuate mediocrity, but to fan the sparks of imagination and revolt against what is reactionary, soulless, greedy and exploitative, and to encourage writers from the factory floor and the branch meeting. We would like world famous writers, and national figures, and we admire their works in other publications: but our aim is to help to build a team of working men and women who are reflecting in new and vivid writing the explosive left movement in Britain and the world.
We need a lot of help. We are getting new writers with each issue. Our sales, still modest, are growing. Our financial appeal was generously backed. But we still do not know whether Labour Party wards, Trade Union branches, workers in factories, students, Communist Party members, enjoy "Voices" and feel that it meets a need.
Three of us went recently to a Labour Party group in Stockport, and read pieces from "Voices" to them and discussed them. There was genuine appreciation of what we are doing We would like to test the reactions of all sorts of people to "Voices" and invite you to ask your organization, or student bodies to give us a chance to explain "Voices" to them.
We need the Labour Movement. Does the Labour Movement need us? We think it does. Us and organizations and publications like us. We ask Labour Party and Trade Union and Communist Party, Young Socialist and Student bodies to help us. How? These are some ways.
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Our thanks to Peter Carter for the graphics.
Ben Ainley
JOHN MACLEAN
Brian Gallon, 12 Frank Place, North Shields, Tyne and Wear, is researching material for a play about John Maclean, the Clydeside socialist leader.
If anyone has personal recollecticns or parents or grandparents who remember Maclean, or any written material about him, will they please get in touch with Mr. Gallon.
The cash raised by our appeal in November which finally raised over £145 helped us clear our debts, and get "Voices 5" out. We are not out of the wood. It costs around £150 to get out an issue of "Voices" and at this moment, from the proceeds of sales of "Voices 5" we have around £100. We are compelled therefore to ask people interested in our survival to continue to help us financially. We will acknowledge directly all sums received. Make cheques payable either to Ben Ainley or to Frank Parker.
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Number the pages of your contribution. Write your name and address on each page. If possible, send typescripts; but if your piece is hand written1 make sure it is legible to the printer.
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| Do you feel misspent |
| Are you fully content |
| In the role life's given to you? |
| Do you feel all the while |
| Something more worthwhile |
| Is what you should be aiming to do? |
| Do you feel overwrought |
| At the change change has brought |
| In this life by men different than you? |
| Do you just criticise, |
| Live a life like the flies |
| And discontent spread like disease? |
| Do you play your part |
| On the basis of art |
| Deny what the heart tells you? |
| At the end of the day |
| When you get your pay |
| Do you feel it just isn't worthwhile? |
| Then cor blimey mate, You're in a helluva state |
| And there's not going to be a next time. |
| Or |
| I hope that it's different next time. |
| M.Doyle |
The placards screamed the headlines. The evening paper followed through with the rest of the story.
Citizens homeward bound released from the day's toil, bought the papers and read the news in shocked silence. "EMINENT NUCLEAR PHYSICIST RESIGNS".
Professor Lewley withdrawn into the corner of the first class railway compartment and taking refuge behind a copy of The Times, shook his head sadly and sighed. Seeing the announcement of his action in the cold black and white of the placard and stripped of the warmth of his covering explanation, aroused in him a deep sense of desolation. However, he thought to himself, staring unseeingly at the small print of the morning's paper, the deed was now done and the step now taken from which there was no retracing.
He had resigned on a matter of principle and that was that.
His thoughts went back to that final scene when after months of grave and gnawing disquiet within himself he had faced his eleven colleagues on the committee of top level scientists and had delivered the bombshell. "Gentlemen", he had said, "Brother scientists, after deep and serious thought on my part I have come to the conclusion that I can no longer reconcile my own feelings with the aims and objects of this committee for the development of weapons for use in nuclear warfare.
Please colleagues, I ask you here and now to be good enough to accept my resignation from this committee."
Looking at the stunned faces of the men around him had moved him to add softly, "Believe me, I have, as I said, given this matter deep and serious consideration and I find that now at long last I must face the realisation that I can no longer work on objects for which the ultimate use will be the destruction of man, by man."
Of course his resignation had not been accepted unanimously. Some of the older ones had been prepared to argue it out with him, make him see reason so to speak, but in the end they too had had to give in, hoping that perhaps he had been overworking and needed a break for two or three weeks.
"Why not take a trip over the Xmas holidays, Lewley old chap", professor Dacre had said soothingly in a tone suspiciously like that one would use to a man on the brink of a nervous breakdown. "Just pack a bag and fly off with your wife and kiddie, say to the Bahamas." "It should be pretty warm there, just now, I can fix the flight for you old man, no trouble at all, and you'll get there just in time for the Xmas celebrations." quite an idea y'know."
Lewley shuddered a little, thinking back on Dacre's patronising air.
Hm! The Xmas celebrations that really was what had brought things to a head and had determined him to take the final step.
So simple. So utterly, utterly simple, the circumstances that had at last removed the scales from his eyes and had revealed the image of his true self, standing clearly before him, face to face.
How often one's puppet sneaks in and takes command, steering one this way and that whilst one's own soul squeezed out stands by biding its time just waiting the opportune moment in which to reassert itself. And so it had been with the learned man of science.
The false premise on which his own sense of security had rested and which had begun to rock quite some time ago, had finally toppled when he had been assigned to the role of Santa Claus at the Xmas party of his young daughter Caroline.
Several of Caroline's little friends were spending the Xmas holidays abroad with their respective parents and so the Xmas party had been held three weeks before the holidays.
Dorothy the professor's wife had made up a cloak for him out of some red cotton fabric, a bit of medical tow had done for the beard and a furry cap had completely covered his dark brown head. When he had protested at the too obvious fake of the tow, Dorothy had replied, "Oh the kids'll never notice, all that interests them is the sack of gifts which you are going to hand out, after all Caroline and her friends are only five years old."
Then she had added in mock solemn tones,
"I promise you when Caroline's seven you shall have a full blown grey beard."
When Caroline's seven - sev-en sev-en were his last thoughts as he drifted off into uneasy slumber that night. "What makes you so sure Caroline will reach seven?" said his soul, accusingly, confronting him and barring his way so that he could move neither to the left nor to the right, but only backwards.
Wildly he tried to press on, but his soul now dressed as Santa Claus and sporting a full blown grey beard and wearing a mask of the professor's own features, continued to stand in his way. "Who told you, who told you?" Frantically the professor looked around for a scapegoat, his eyes large with apprehension. Then he spotted the tow-bearded Daddy Xmas. Pointing a forefinger in his direction he cried out desperately,
"He told me, he told me." The tow-bearded red-cloaked figure advanced towards him, also wearing a mask the replica of the professor's own features. "Ha, you'd no need to listen to me," he croaked. "No need at all to listen to me."
"You see", said his soul, gently. "You see!"
"Yes, I see it all now," said the man of science, dropping swiftly into a relaxed sleep. The way was now clear, the doubts, the uncertainties, the nagging pointers were stilled once and forever.
And so he had gone forth and given his decision to them. The decision which by now was being blazoned forth for the world to see and to wonder at. To be repeated faithfully by some, to be distorted by others.
Dorothy was waiting for him when he arrived home. He took three large strides towards her and with a tired sigh went straight into her outstretched arms.
They clung together thus, for a few moments, neither speaking, each deeply aware of their spiritual oneness.
Then Dorothy looked up at her husband, her eyes shining as she uttered the words he wanted more than anything to hear from her lips at this moment. "Don't you see, darling," she said, "You have given those kids the best Xmas present in the whole world."
Rose Friedman
| I lay in the darkness looking at the black |
| A car past placing a window on each of the walls. |
| The clock murmured on and on always asking the same question |
| I was uneasy waiting for a voice that never came. |
| A tree its branches moving as a Japanese hand dancer |
| Formed slowly in half closed eyes. |
| Black on a white grey haze, branches pointing. |
| Shiny raven branches, carving twisting in unsettled order |
| Each offset joint a shape of beautiful agony |
| Saying something that I couldn't hear. |
| Warm blankets collected my thoughts |
| I mumbled prayers in tired subconscious |
| Sleep pulled at my eyelids and the story was left untold. |
| AM Horne |
| I've no flowers for your grave to-day |
| So I'll offer my thoughts as a bouquet. |
| You remember the clock you used to wind? |
| Think of it ... you'll call it to mind. |
| It misses the hand that wound it up |
| And treated it like a loving cup. |
| The roof still leaks, it's not very strong, |
| The nights are awful ... awful long. |
| My pension was cut when you went away, |
| In fact, it was cut the very same day. |
| And flowers are dear in the winter time, |
| If only we lived in a warmer clime. |
| You still haven't got a stone at your head |
| My money just goes for rent and some bread, |
| And the children don't visit me any more |
| Life is harder ... when you're very poor. |
| Everyone goes rushing and tearing about, |
| Remember old Ted, the way he did shout? |
| My old friends have gone ... all gone away, |
| Young folk are different ... nothing to say. |
| I'm afraid I won't see you to-morrow, |
| My dear ... it causes me very great sorrow. |
| I'm so shaky now ... I suppose I'm old |
| And I walk so slowly and, oh it's so cold. |
| The old coat I have so faded from blue |
| Lets the wind come tearing through. |
| If old Ted were here he'd help me along, |
| Young folk are different ... tho' big and strong. |
| They just pass me by with never a glance |
| For them to speak ... there' s simply no chance. |
| Maybe they're thoughtless, the folk of to-day, |
| And not unkind as some might say. |
| Do you think, dear, that people do change, |
| Or is it just me, that's acting strange? |
| But, here I am talking in the wind and the rain, |
| And all I keep doing is just to complain. |
| But, listen to this ... it'll make you smile, |
| Yesterday, I walked for nearly a mile. |
| I was passing a church, old and black, |
| And, thinking of you, went slowly back. |
| I went inside and walked all around, |
| Apart from my footsteps there wasn't a sound. |
| I went so very softly, so timid and mild, |
| Right up to a statue of Madonna and Child. |
| A candle was burning with slow, steady flame, |
| I lit one for you ... and said softly your name. |
| I loved you all the days of your life, |
| I love you still, oh, my wife. |
| When summer comes and the birds are singing, |
| I'll come every day and I'll be bringing |
| Roses of red to show I love you, |
| And to make you smile, flowers of blue. |
| Your favourite colour ... just like the skies, |
| And, oh, I remember ... just like your eyes. |
| Michael Ferns |
| Courageous man, he copulates; |
| He gives to earth the gift |
| From out his loins: |
| His living replicas. |
| His phallic organ |
| Rejoices in new life. |
| Perhaps he has forgotten |
| The phallic symbol gun, |
| Shooting out destruction |
| Into earth's worn womb; |
| For everyone that he creates |
| A hundred more shall die. |
| For you, for me, O sorry man, I sigh. |
| J McFarlane |
Pseudonyms
F.G. Walker
Father John O'Rourke, small and wiry, was in his study when the bell rang. He put the silver chalice back in its case and opened the door. Outside, in the bloom, was a woman. She was tall and slim like a willow, wearing a dark green suit and a green 'Robin Hood' hat.
"Good evening."
"Good evening. I'm sorry to come so late, but I well, I was in the district so I thought it would be alright." Her voice had a soft, light sound, like spring rain.
"I don't believe we've met." She shook her head.
"I'm a writer ... Pat Fielding and I thought ..."
"Not the Pat Fielding?"
"If you mean the one who wrote 'Tombstones at Midnight' , yes."
"Well!" He studied her for some moments.
"Perhaps I'd better tell you why I've called."
He stood aside. "You'd better come in then."
She stepped into the light. He closed the door, noting that she was much younger than he had first thought, and she was quite pretty too. He led the way to the study; waved her to a chair.
"Thank you." She sank into the seat, sending a speculative glance around the room.
Father O'Rourke stood across from her, fingering the soft flesh at the end of his chin.
"You were saying," he said.
"What?" She flicked her eyes back.
"The reason you came."
She smiled lopsidedly. "Well, it might seem silly really but I've just started my next book and I'm trying to ..." She paused, gesticulating with one hand. "How shall I put it ... trying to get the right ... atmosphere." Her voice rose on the last word.
"I see." His eyes narrowed. "This new book. Is it anything like the last one?"
"You've read it?" She lifted her eyebrows a little.
"Yes, twice as a matter of fact."
"I'm flattered. I hope you'll buy the new one." He shrugged. There was a small silence. An idea flickered in his brain. "Perhaps I could offer you a glass of sherry?"
"Yes, thank you."
He went over to the sideboard and poured one glass of sherry.
"Look," he said then, "I have to make a phone call, I won't be a minute." He went through to the hallway, made the call and then padded outside into the drive. Her car was turned round, facing the road. He wondered what she was doing here. Then he laughed softly. He opened the car door and took the ignition key. Then he went back to the study.
"May I look round the church tonight?" The woman stood up as he entered.
"I suppose so ... if you're not frightened."
"You'll tell me it's haunted next."
He held the door open and waited while she picked up her handbag. As they went out he said: "I suppose I'll be in your book?"
"Perhaps." She stopped; gave him a quick look from under her dark lashes, then she added: "In fact it might be a good idea."
"You haven't decided then?" She tilted her head on one side.
"It depends on the story ... and the atmosphere. Shall we go?"
"Sure." He led the way across to the church; pushed open the door. "What would you like to see?"
"The belfry." She sounded as if she had been expecting the question. He turned left into the small alcove that led to the stone steps. Looking back at her, he said casually,
"They say a ghostly monk has been seen hereabouts." She stiffened visibly.
"Oh! Really?" Her voice trembled. "Where ... exactly?"
"Here. Still want to go up?" She looked at him for several long seconds.
"Yes." He started up the narrow winding stairs. At the top he unbolted a small trapdoor and climbed through. He turned, looking down at her. She stayed there, her head and shoulders through the opening. A little breathlessly she said:
"Are we alone now?"
"Of course." He stepped back. "Come on up." A smile pulled at her lips. She reached up; grabbed the trapdoor.
"Sorry Father. But I've made other plans. She pulled down the trapdoor then and slipped home the bolt. With a laugh that echoed on the stairs she hurried away. He knelt down; tugged at the handle. It held fast. He stood upright, breathing hard. Then he remembered the torch in his pocket. He rushed over to the wall and stared hard at the darkness. Twin headlights pierced the night on the main road. He almost laughed out loud as he began flashing the torch.
The police car swept up to the church. Two minutes later he heard the bolt drawn on the trapdoor. A burly constable led the way down into the church and across to the vestry.
"We caught her, sir," he boomed. "Trying to start her car." He swept open the study door.
Father O'Rourke blinked at the brightness. In a chair near his desk sat the woman. Her face was the colour of raw cod. A police sergeant towered over her.
"Caught her with this, sir," he said. He indicated the silver chalice on the desk. "If the car had started she'd have got away with it." Father O'Rourke smiled impishly. He took the ignition key from his pocket; tossed it on to the desk.
"I made sure that she wouldn't," he said. The woman jerked her head up; for a second her eyes blazed.
"You ... you... How did you know about me?"
"Simple." He spread his hands, as if that one -gesture was sufficient. There was a tiny silence.It was almost as if, from across the room, he felt her wince. The police sergeant rubbed thoughtfully at his chin. Father O'Rourke sauntered across to a book case, selected a volume and handed it to the woman.
"Perhaps you'd like to read this," he said in a soft whimsical voice.
She gazed at it curiously. It was encased in a brightly coloured dust cover. Her eyes lingered on the words: "A NEW NOVEL BY PAT FIELDING." She turned the book over, and on the back was a picture of Father O'Rourke.
| The bell spews its evil and the leash is slipped, |
| you're washed, your gear's gathered |
| and you sail like a pigeon into the clean fresh air |
| circling through the scent of honeysuckle that isn't there |
| flying up up into the bright sky until the sunlight hurts your eyes |
| then you come to rest upon the gentle, rose scented waters of melancholy |
| until the leashes of necessity and conformity drag you back next morning. |
| Jimmy Barnes |
| People like us |
| can be very mean |
| until we learn |
| the name of the game. |
| Blame if you must the blacks |
| for the squalor we live in, |
| for our depreciated |
| standard of living, |
| but who gains most |
| from lack of houses, |
| whose profits are swollen |
| with stolen wages? |
| Mean we shall remain |
| until we learn |
| the name of the game |
| is money. |
| Bill Eburn |
| Harry comes on Fridays, paydays |
| Round the doors in his estate car |
| Holding back the revolution singlehanded |
| Outfits for you and your man for the club dance |
| Fifty pence a week, no deposit, no bother. |
| He carries an armload of lurex dresses |
| Cheap tinsel, wherever he goes |
| In case some one's in need |
| The car is bulging with cellophaned sheets |
| Shoes and boots, jeans and pit shirts |
| All new, all in a jumble. |
| Working late for village Cinderellas |
| Swopping shift money for weekend dreams |
| No deposit, no bother. |
| Vivien Leslie |
| Staunch, true Comrade |
| it hurts to see you |
| suffer for your belief. |
| You are ready to fight |
| for a world that seems lost. |
| You swim against the tide |
| waving your convictions |
| like a banner |
| while others run and hide |
| wrapped in their cocoon |
| of complacency |
| fed on glib promises |
| and poisoned by subtle tongues |
| against you. |
| Your courage shines like a beacon |
| A light in a dark world. |
| Jean Sutton |
| Went to school, got no joy - |
| Where's your school uniform, boy?" |
| Messed around, broke up chairs, |
| Smoked fags under the stairs. |
| Got a job on the assembly line |
| Same bloody thing all the time. |
| Look forward to Fridays - at the pub scene. |
| At the match on Saturdays - let off some steam. |
| Born into this mess, never had a hope, |
| Too many kids, me mum couldn't cope. |
| Too noisy and crowded at home, same at school; |
| No wonder I broke the rules! |
| Me mum just watches the tele, |
| Me dad's always on the drink. |
| And you wonder why we go on strike, |
| The system that causes this stinks. |
| I'm the stool the middle class sit on, |
| I'm the tool the middle class shit on. |
| But one day - you wait and see, |
| We'll run our factory; me mates and me. |
| Oppression... |
| Corruption... |
| Depression... |
| Disruption... |
| Eruption. |
| Solution? |
|
Revolution! |
|
Tony Harcup of the Basement Writers |
A number of comments follow on the article by Ken Clay which appeared in Voices 5:
Of course there is a tendency for new, dedicated, enthusiastic working class writers to write in the way he deplores, but I think if they are sincere, and not just striving for effect, or to convert, they'll learn to be artistic as well as realistic.
There is also a technique of writing which does not come easily or naturally to people whose vocabulary has already been limited by the so-called examples of culture around us. Small wonder they overdo things, when they write themselves, like teenagers who must be fashionable, even if it hurts.
Finally, if we are sincere, we too must strive to be encouraging, as well as critical, both of ourselves as well as fellow writers - God knows the unpublished, unknown, writer has enough to contend with, when trying to get somebody to read his work, and there must be many who remain dumb through lack of opportunity or hope. This is where VOICES CAN HELP, by making people more articulate, and perhaps eventually more observant, analytical, critical, and discerning too.
W. Froom
Would Ken Clay perhaps have modified his schoolmasterly rudeness if he had thought his letter would be printed? Talk about didactic? Of course it is often hard to avoid sounding bossy if we lay down the law, especially to those who don't accept our ideas.
People write out of their experience of life; often it is a hurt that sets us composing. Capitalism is a system that crushes and hurts us and we cry out. Our one sidedness is usually too much doom and gloom and we are embarrassed when we celebrate the joys of life, but that too is real, and genuine experience. Why should those of us who are happy in love be called dreamers for example? As for style, people write as they have learnt, and only in relation with others do they modify and refine in their own way the common heritage - which of course is part of bourgeois culture - but are we to stop speaking in case we are bourgeois? It is not the words we use, it's what we say that makes us different.
The fashion is to be opaque, of course, and such a style is great fun to write; but are we writing to show off or to communicate? In years of reading poetry (not just my own) to ordinary people I for one have had to make a choice. If art is communication, as I believe, and if we want to talk to people, we must talk in common ways. But not in watered down English or in bad language. The Labour Movement taught me that long ago.
Finally, how intolerant can you be? The infinite variety of personality offers many ways and styles of writing. There is more than one 'right' way. The thing, surely, is the affirmation of belief and confidence in people, and the refusal to accept misery as our lot.
As for me, I have lived as an active communist for forty years, and must write out of such an experience subconsciously by now.
Frances Moore
I find it a matter of urgency to make a reply to the article about "Voices" written by Ken Clay. I hope you can find room in your next issue to publish this.
The main error in his article is his definition of Socialist Realism, Socialist Realism is NOT "A discipline designed to produce parables rather than art." That may be Ken's definition, I suspect Ken has mistaken the crude "banner waving" material that does at times appear in "Voices" for a definition of Socialist Realism, if so, he couldn't be farther off the mark. The discussion that really remains is: What is "Socialist Realism"?
How many conflicting ideas emerge, basically ranging from those who never seem to have shaken off their respect for bourgeois ideas, hence they do produce these abstract, complex, over-worded symphonies of literature that Ken mentions.
Then the other extreme is the growing idea that any crudely rhyming, "Red Banner" waving wordiology, however crude it is in form (sometimes the cruder the better) in fact anything written by a worker constitutes "Workers' art": therefore if it waves aloft the red flag that is "Socialist Realism".
This form of diversity will I think be inevitable in any left wing movement of the arts such as "Voices" which is trying to counter bourgeois publications, and I think it will be some time before Socialist Realism in the western movement really emerges.
Anyone in contact with present publications from the Socialist Countries (Soviet literature etc.) will see the results of past struggle, the emergence of Real Socialist Realism.
Socialist Realism in my definition is art conscious of its role in Society. An art having something progressive to contribute, an art based on all aspects of humanity, progress and beauty. Art should uplift, agitate, enlighten, educate and give the reader a greater understanding of his relationship with his fellow man, nature, society, love and the ever present riddle of infinity, but must always retain some aesthetic quality.
Poetry is a medium of expressing ideas, thoughts, feelings etc. that cannot be expressed in any prose. If prose could cover these manifestations fully Poetry would never exist, therefore Form is important as a medium of creating in the reader the emotions that the writer intended. Socialist Realism strives to create positive emotions and reactions to the world around us. The worker who is talented and has something to say, will, with effort, defeat all the obstructions that lack of decent education present to him.
Oversimplicity, crudeness and "banner waving" (The glorious working class marching sternly forward etc.) is not only unreal because it is most often not the case, it also lacks humanity and didn't Marx call Communism "Scientific humanism"? Also it can tend to embarrass the audience. Over-complexity tends to often cover subjectiveness and tends to overawe the audience.
Our job is not to create a "sub-culture" but real Socialist culture of the very best. The idea that any worker who picks up a pen and scribbles a few words is a proletarian artist is false and often comes from the middle class. Bringing culture to and out of the working class is a challenge, but not impossible.
By supporting "Voices" we can help this process, so let us throw our words at one another and the world for the sake of humanity.
Fraternally, Ian E Reed
1. "He will win universal applause who blends what is improving with what is pleasing, and both delights and instructs the reader" wrote, Horace, which does rather suggest the problem is not altogether new. Ken Clay would doubtless like Voices to do both. The question is how.
2. Things to avoid according to Ken
(a) Didacticism - many of us feel there is not much point in writing unless you have an audience; some of us go further and consider there is not much point in having an audience unless you give them the works. Too true. How many of us have lost friends that way?
(b) Social realism - this seems to me to be an extension of the above except that to the sin of proselytising is added the further sin of over simplifying. Capitalists wear black hats, communists white ones. To this too some of us must plead guilty.
(c) Naive idealism - Ken seems to be suggesting that even if people like us have something to say they don't say it because they feel inhibited, and tend instead to ape their betters. One reason for this might be that Voices is unique. Other journals won't publish unless the contributor sticks to the rules.
3. What is to be done then? Or, to put it another way, what would I do if I were a member of the Editorial Board?
(a) I would accept with gratitude any contributions which both delighted and instructed, although one could expect these to be few in number. Blake, Byron and Shelley, and say Siegfried Sassoon in his anti-war poems, could do it; but most of us are learning the hard way.
(b) The rest I would select according to whether they delighted or instructed, though I would expect Voices to have a bias in favour of the latter. There are enough glossy journals that serve to please.
(c) Those that appeared to fall into neither category would have to be returned to sender, though I would like to think that someone would be able to find the time to return them with a word of encouragement. There is no point in our persuading ourselves there is a vast amount of talent available unless we do our best to use it.
4. Ken may well think that my response raises more problems than it solves. e.g. what do we mean by "instruct" and "delight"? Well I'm not greedy. Let someone else have a go.
Bill Eburn
| Who builds the bridges and the 'planes |
| Who builds the ships and all the trains |
| Who builds the roads and sleek fast cars |
| Who are slaughtered in their masters' wars |
| Who wander homeless in every nation |
| Whilst editors express their jubilation |
| At the jumping stocks and shares |
| Whilst pensioners starve and no one cares. |
| And who the fools that endure all this, alas, |
| The silly, bloody working class. |
| Who sweats and groans and grows old fast |
| Who suffers and moans and at the last |
| Are led like beasts to grim old places |
| To sit and sigh at unknown faces. |
| Whilat politicians lie in beds |
| Making up speeches about the Reds. |
| Who forms the queues outside the dole |
| Who in history has the role |
| Of saving all, except themselves, alas, |
| The silly, bloody working class. |
| Michael Ferns |
Modern Poetry, Eliot and the Working Class
Does the modern poet write for the working class, or for fellow poets and critics? I'm afraid it is not the former. It is not that poetry is not easily available to the working class - it is. Its insularity derives from its esoterical lineage and its erudite- ness. A poet, such as Eliot, has so many cross references (what working class man hears of Webster, or St. John of the Cross?) that the poetry can become like a Times crossword puzzle - interesting, taxing but pointless.
One can't help feeling that Eliot can only be appreciated by someone with a similar education to his own (remembering that he was at school until his mid-twenties). Obviously, he can only write of his background, his class, and the preoccupations of his class. The truth of the matter is that Eliot writes for poets; for a man to understand him, he must raise himself to the level of a poet. Which isn't a bad thing, but hardly feasible considering the circumstances of most people. To use one of Eliot's own phrases - "there is no objective correlative common to the rich Oxford educated banker, and the ill educated capstan lathe operator."
Poetry can only become truly modern, when it can live as the expression of a struggle to raise our conscious mind to a greater level of awareness. What has gone before in poetry has been the expression of a small minority of people's reaction to the universe and society, the greater part of humanity's feelings going unverbalised. It has been played like a game for the elite, with a strict, almost impenetrable code of conduct. It has been preserved like a Ming Vase, for all eternity - daring imitation or improvement.
Poetry should be written, digested and thrown away for practical purposes. Art is of its time, created from its time, by people who will take the rein of history and guide it. Do we need this over-indulgence in past expression, expressing what has gone is dead?
A people has its creative wellspring, and only when we become involved in history, will the poetry flow. When we awake to the modern situation, we will get modern poetry; and what poetry does a line of machines inspire?
Real modern poetry will only come through an honest survey of the situation. Eliot represents decadence, art for the liberation of the individual, He is not concerned for the rest of humanity, other than the rich, or gifted.
A modern poet will realise his purpose and function. It will not be to give the dilettante something to prattle on about; or to furnish material for the professors to write exegesis. It will be to reflect, consider and direct the mass of people now ready to break in on history. To give them a mirror on themselves, and a fresh language to express their struggle.
Poetry has become the activity of the few for the few. It still is the poetry of unconnected individual destiny with an unhealthy preoccupation with self. Even poetry of rebellion - say Baudelaire or Rimbaud is put into a snug system, its shock value eliminated by careful study.
The truth has to be retold by each generation to itself. Reality has to be re-examined in the light of our total experience, which is different from generation to generation.
If we are the lost children of god, alone without a faith, we should not waste time looking for our lost father as Eliot does. We should look to find ourselves, and poetry must be of this struggle, not of lone individuals' search for the absolute.
Tony Whitfield
| Poetry; Daughter of inspiration and love, |
| where are you now in England? |
| Are you now drowned in intellectual blood, |
| has your body been ravished |
| and drowned by the flood? |
| Smashed into formless phantoms? |
| Poetry; Mother of rebellion and hope, |
| where are you now in England? |
| Have bandits of words now tethered your scope |
| to meaningless rantings? |
| Now in darkness to grope |
| in their minds empty spaces. |
| Poetry; Lover of freedom and truth, |
| where are you now in England? |
| ravished by demons both base and uncouth, |
| with no direction to roam |
| your torn body a proof |
| of dignified killers still prowling. |
| Ian E. Reed |
| He came to the village brandishing wall charts |
| Equipped with degrees and graphs |
| He lectured on social change and evolution |
| He stood his reasons up in rows |
| And argued with himself |
| To make his lack of prejudice apparent |
| Out of the crowd came a demanding shout |
| "Think yer clever, eh? Name me three early tatties!" |
| Vivien Leslie |
| Stephanie |
| Wait for me |
| Stand still |
| Remember your Kerb Drill |
| Open your eyes |
| It's not just a prayer. |
| Look right |
| Look left |
| And Look right again |
| And Look left again! |
| And Look right again! |
| And Look left again! |
| And... |
| Wimbledon has nothing |
| on this |
| At last a gap |
| Run across as fast |
| as your little legs |
| can carry you |
| Do not trip! |
| They cannot stop |
| They are not |
| Niggers or hippies |
| or old age pensioners |
| but good solid |
| First Class citizens |
| who do not |
| have to wait |
| respectfully |
| at the kerb. |
| Alan Prior |
| We came en masse |
| To cheer you in your hospital bed |
| complete with gifts |
| and smiling faces, |
| grouped round your clean clinical bed |
| a mission of love |
| with one eye on the clock. |
| And then you took the stage |
| and held us spellbound, |
| words and pictures tumbled |
| from your lips. |
| Heads turned round |
| and smiled to see us laughing, |
| though they could not hear |
| your droll and merry quips. |
| You warmed us, |
| we who had come to comfort |
| and to cheer. |
| And when we left |
| turning to wave at the door |
| we saw your smiling face |
| and took you with us |
| -somehow, we did not leave you |
| lying there. |
| Jean Sutton |
| Through a haze of driving rain |
| the distant hills are bleak and grey. |
| Wind, cold, gusty, gaunt, flaps the rain like blankets |
| pinned against the sky, |
| then slaps the backs of animals as they stand, miserable, patient. |
| The fields, full-flooded lakes, feed the ditches and the roads, |
| drowning all life. |
| All his darts thrown, |
| the wind staggers, falls, feebly struggles. |
| The rain, his former plaything, now gently covers him. |
| Suddenly the clouds break, a javelin of light flames through, |
| touches the hills on the instant, for man to see |
| all his hopes and yes, his immortality. |
| AG Froome |
| The Pound, my son, is best of friends, |
| which in thy pocket dwells, |
| In two score years and inure, I've proved, |
| No lie my Father tells, |
| Whilst pride of place, the cash to save, |
| He gave his full attention, |
| There's saving, other, I've learned dear Father |
| Than cash to merit mention. |
| The life-boat crew, whilst battling through |
| the storm think not of earning, |
| Or the fireman bold, when flames enfold, |
| Some helpless victim burning, |
| The Surgeon's skill with scalpel, will |
| Great numbers save from dying, |
| Each course they choose, at times may lose, |
| None count the cost of trying. |
| Although we toast this numerous host, |
| And others, who us do favour, |
| Unlike these deeds, among us, breeds, |
| Another form of saver, |
| Whose fellow man, he'd trample down, |
| That he himself may climb, |
| Would soul deprave, his face to save, |
| It's the ultimate, untried crime. |
| This Predator, in peace and war, |
| To no one land peculiar, |
| Would he in Hell be better placed? |
| He's surely nature's failure? |
| The death he's planned, while in command, |
| Some died without a trace, |
| what thousands yet will die to save? |
| Some Politician's face? |
| Will he, in anger with his finger? |
| Press the button we cannot stop, |
| All life disgrace, whilst saving face, |
| We can only wait and hope, |
| That while there's time, men will combine |
| With Charity and Worth, |
| No privilege crave, but just to save, |
| The face of Planet Earth. |
| Alexander Jamieson |
| Liggin' together o't' th'after, |
| We talked o' thi mam. |
| Aw'd said, |
| Mindin' 'er gabbin' an' laughter, |
| It wur 'ard t'insense, as hoo'r dead. |
| An aw rued hoo couldn't ha' known |
| Ut, tho' yo'n parted, 'im an' thee, |
| T' feelin's twixt us a' t' while 'ad grown: |
| Ut sum'dy luv'd thee - an' theaw me. |
| But, at t'moment, aw'r some an' ta'en |
| Aback, as tha nestled to lay |
| Thi yed o' mi shou'der - an' then, |
| She'll know now, though", aw yeard thee say: |
| An' so tha wept |
| Afoore tha slept. |
| We're nooan o' t' same mind o' this'n, |
| Us two; for me it's 'ard to grasp |
| One meht lam an' look an' listen |
| Who's nobbut neaw yepsintle ass. |
| Beside which, t' thowt one meht ha' sin |
| Us bally-to-bally jus' neaw |
| a rude sort of intrusion in |
| Ear lowly luv-o'er-t'latch, chuseheaw. |
| Thi breathin' steady wur good t'hark, |
| Whilst t' sliftert city neet-sky leet |
| Thwittled thi beauty eawt o' t' dark |
| So's gazin', fond, aw'r fain to see't: |
| An' aw c'd own |
| Aw'r nooan alone. |
| Bu' t' neet-lang shadder fancy - yearnsfu' to compensate |
| for t' mischance o' t' toom moment when aw'd failed to relate - |
| proved nooan jannock bi t' dawn leet, an' ony rooad to' late: |
| frae't let-deawn - reet that moment - thy luv wur set t'abate. |
| Jone o' Broonlea |
GLOSSARY - Turning Point by Jone o' Broonlea
Insense - realise. Some-an' - very much. Yepsintle ass - a small amount ("handful") of ash. Meht ha' sin - might have seen. Sliftert - enter through a crack. Thwittled - carved. Fain - glad. Own - admit. Toom - empty. Jannock - genuine.
"Dear God, another day! What was it? - Tuesday, Oh yes, stairs and hall and mince-meat stew." Already the morning was slipping by. The pots waited; silently sneering under a blanket of egg-yolk and toast crusts. They should have been washed long ago, still, she promised herself that she would do them as soon as she had had another cup of tea.
She wandered over to the kettle, her image curving down its side, like the walls of the house around her throat. Icily she picked up the baby's rusk and put it into her mouth. She hadn't even realised what she had done until angry screams of annoyance met her half-closed ears. "Sorry chicken," she thought, too tired and distant to speak, and placed it back into her child's mouth. She lifted her hand to ruffle his hair but accidentally knocked his cheek with water-worn hands, heavy with boredom and hidden despair.
Plugging in the kettle she thought about how she had found her ring in last night's hot-pot. Should she tell her husband and make him laugh like she used to? Searching in her mind for the answer she realised she didn't even know how to talk to him any more; besides he probably couldn't remember her losing it. She put the thought out of her mind. It was too much trouble worrying over words. The pots grew in number. The electricity ran out and the kettle murmured to a halt. She went to sit down, tired out from thinking. Scared of thinking.
Rosslyn O'Connor
A warm welcome to "Fireweed" announced as a quarterly magazine of working class and socialist arts, beautifully designed and printed, copiously illustrated, and with a dozen distinguished contributors, including the world-famous Bertolt Brecht and Pablo Neruda. If this level can be maintained, "Fireweed" will be that "flowering weed that spreads across waste land" which is the meaning of its title.
For the most part it is a fine compilation, and if this reviewer expresses his preferences, for the world-famous Neruda and Brecht, for Archie Hill's unbearably tragic story of a boy's first day at the foundry, for David Craig's poems of crofters, for the extract from Margaret Parkinson's novel, and for Leon Rosselson's magnificent folk ballads, others may well find matter for pleasure in other contributions.
It is said to be a brave venture to launch a magazine like this in these difficult days. But when the old world is visibly collapsing before our eyes, when revolutionary ferment and change is seen on every continent, among millions of people, the need for art to give confident expression, imaginative creative expression to it, to open up for hitherto silent man and women a medium in which they can speak for themselves, is very urgent.
Elsewhere "Voices" carries an advertisement of Fireweed No. 2 which will appear in the summer, and this promises to maintain the present level. "Voices" which carries no national names, and whose writers are so far unknown, sees in "Fireweed" a colleague and a co-worker, and we hope to be of mutual assistance in the future. Trade Unions, Labour Party, Communist Party and the host of people who both love the arts and work for socialism and peace, should give "Fireweed" active support.
Ben Ainley

| Listen to the old men cry the pity |
| Remember remember remember to weep |
| Remember to breathe in long and deep |
| The smell of grass burning in the city. |
| Balcony railing scrapes shins unused to climbing |
| Bloodstain like ink on blotting paper |
| Spreads downwards and outwards on nylon stocking |
| Tears mingle at corners of mouth with desperate |
| saliva |
| Red scrabbling furious hands |
| Scratch at brickwork |
| Grasp at stanchion |
| In vain |
| The final irony |
| Not to jump but to fall |
| Like the first autumn acorn |
| Ten storeys she plunges |
| Breath forced out of tortured lungs |
| Screeches like the death cry of a train |
| Entering a tunnel |
| Turning on a bedroom light on each floor as she passes |
| Finally explodes blood and brains |
| Like a water bag on the concrete car park |
| The new curtains just would not fit |
| Ten storeys' worth of women send ten storeys' worth of children |
| To bed and weep |
| Ten storeys' worth of men make love to the women |
| Below on the adjoining half finished block |
| The old night watchman throws an empty soup can |
| At a mongrel peeing on the cement bags |
| On the ninth floor a woman stretches to put up new curtains |
| Smell of grass burning in the city. |
| Alan Arnison |
| Comment upon this whore's exchange |
| On methods how to get your man? |
| Sales talk on an accepted range |
| packeted to a streamlined plan. |
| Protuberance of breast and bum |
| Permitted but of belly barred - |
| Hogarth's exuberance become |
| Vulgar and therefore off the card. |
| More mealymouthed less glossy page - |
| That gives the little woman hints |
| On what attractions will engage |
| And hold her worker between stints. |
| Intellectuals display |
| Unmealymouthed and without ruth |
| Their wares in the same brazen way |
| Tricked out with scientific truth. |
| If you accept the woman's place |
| As brood mare, lollipop and drudge, |
| Here's how to prosper in that race, |
| But here's no relevance to love. |
| Frances Moore |
| Those who are ossified themselves in mind |
| And therefore also calcified of heart, |
| Postulate natural laws that bind |
| All of us to as limited a part. |
| When we first start to notice on our face |
| Wrinkles begin to annotate the years, |
| We hold our peace about our passion's pace |
| Lest we provoke the ignorant to jeers. |
| But lay it to your heart for coming time, |
| Love's possibilities are not laid down |
| By armchair pedants bent on tidying life. |
| Middle age modulates new joys to crown |
| Remembered raptures with refreshed delight; |
| Whose days are very full live far into the night. |
| Frances Moore |
| Flaps the ivy softly, |
| Cold against the wall? |
| Is the moon a-peeping |
| Neath its cloudy pall? |
| That's my love a-waiting |
| Shadowed by the beams |
| Harvest moon is making. |
| Wind, what are her dreams? |
| Lift the swaying curtain, |
| Trip the mossy stone |
| Round about the rose-bush |
| Love we are alone! |
| Midnight from the belfry |
| Booms for them its bliss |
| Age all lies a-sleeping. |
| Youth can kiss. |
| Kenneth B. Stump |
| In the year thirteen hundred and seventy six |
| The people of Hamelin were in a rare fix; |
| Though the issue was simple and not politics - |
| All over the town rats were up to their tricks. |
| They lodged in Hamelin's rooms and halls, |
| Below the floors, behind the walls; |
| Moreover - this truth really shamed her - |
| There were rats at large in the Council Chamber. |
| At length an angry population |
| Flocked in a local demonstration, |
| Causing the Mayor and Corporation |
| To quake with a mighty consternation; |
| In absence of a quick solution |
| The townsfolk promised retribution: |
| Let the problem be rats, or the trouble be muck, |
| The Council of Hamelin could not 'pass the buck'. |
| Six hundred long years later |
| to us this story's strange; |
| better does Bristol City |
| its corporate chores arrange: |
| Bristol has men and women who toil day by day; |
| They sweep the streets and catch the rats, |
| They heat the schools and feed our brats, |
| Unclog blocked drains; for little pay |
| They nobly clear our waste away. |
| Yet, as I write my ditty, |
| To see fair Bristol dirtied so, |
| And see her townsfolk come and go |
| Mid refuse, is a pity. |
|
MUCK |
| It overtops the dustbins, and blocks the drains and sink |
| It's pumped into the Avon so that the river stinks; |
| It's piled high in our gardens, and litters all the Down; |
| It's massed in heaps and scattered on the pavements of the town; |
| It clogs our feet and nostrils though we avert our eyes; |
| It lies in open spaces, and it smells where'er it lies. |
| I wish we had more people |
| Like Hamelin's forthright folk; |
| I looked up Browning's poem |
| And I read the words they spoke; |
| I imagine them in Broadmead, on the Downs or at the Zoo - |
| I overhear their comments, and watch all that they do: |
| Gazing wide wonderment at our predicament |
| Observing incredulous Bristol ridiculous, |
| They soon appraise it all, are not amazed at all, |
| Treat with derision our sham indecision |
| Avoiding solution, creating confusion. |
| To our body corporate in forthright terms they state |
| This firm conclusion: |
| You need not seek Pied Pipers of magic, good or ill, |
| Your cleaners, sweepers, wipers have the necessary skill; |
| Our Mayor and Corporation, knocked by our population, |
| Gambled fifty-thousand guilders |
| To rid our rats and mice. |
| You've got a better system? Then pay up, don't resist 'em; |
| Rise the fifty-five bob; pay the rate for the job - |
| Believe us; it's cheap at the price.'. |
| Barbara Smith |
| If things go on |
| as they are |
| we shall soon |
| have more cars |
| than people |
| which means that |
| some of them |
| will have to be |
| driven by computers |
| if the profit increment |
| of the Stock Market |
| is to be maintained. |
| If things go on |
| as they are |
| what with all this |
| plastic rubbish |
| even babies will |
| come wrapped in |
| polythene and |
| we shall all go to |
| the Supermarket to |
| take our frozen pick. |
| If things go on |
| as they are |
| what with all |
| these transplants and things |
| my heart will be |
| in Liverpool |
| my kidneys will be |
| in Bristol |
| and my head |
| will be in the clouds. |
| If things go on |
| as they are |
| what with |
| Electronic Telephones |
| the cost of connecting |
| you from A to B |
| will be less than |
| the cost of working |
| out how much it is |
| and the system, |
| like the Oozlam bird |
| will disappear up |
| its own whatsit. |
| Alan Prior |
| A hurt one |
| A maimed one |
| A doll of a girl |
| A doll of a girl |
| She watches |
| They're dancing |
| They're all of a whirl |
| They' re all of a whirl |
| Just a short raid |
| Just a few dead |
| A handful hurt |
| Nothing more to it |
| Tee tom tom |
| Tee tom tom |
|
(I wish I could dance) |
|
(I wish I could dance) |
| Tee tom tom |
| Tee tom tom |
|
(I wish I could dance) |
|
(I wish I could dance) |
| Rose Friedman |
| Far from my window, far said he, |
| Ships skim the horizon, |
| And boulders bend down to the sea. |
| Near to my body, near said he, |
| Cogwheels spin my reason, |
| And Metals move close to me. |
| Fresh round my body, fresh said he, |
| Tulips and sapphires |
| Cling to the tree. |
| Stale to my mouth, stale said he, |
| Oils and grease |
| Collect around me. |
| Tony Whitfield |
| What a place for drama is the countryside; |
| Panic-bold a rabbit darts across the lane, |
| Death by mutilation only just defied. |
| Overhead the crows watch, wickedly alive, |
| Waiting for the pallid lambs too weak to live |
| Their dim eyes to steal, e'er death itself arrive. |
| Half-up the hill, the old sheepdog plays his part, |
| Watch him as he crouches, coaxes, curls and twists, |
| Dog and man together knit in shepherd's art. |
| In the hedge the whitethroat's courtship song is sung, |
| Poised on a branch he pirouettes and patters, |
| Till from his mate the ans'ring notes are rung. |
| Oh! What a place for drama is the countryside, |
| And lucky he, who sees the pageant passing by, |
| And seeing it finds all his senses gratified. |
| Winifred Froom |
| And she danced, and she danced, |
| And she reeled, |
| and she stealed, |
| across blood sodden turf |
| on that murderers field, |
| and her feet as they squelched |
| upon gore and on flesh, |
| the Generals they cheered, |
| their blood red eyes peered, |
| and their darkened mouths leered |
| at that stadium in Chile |
| that stadium of death. |
| And she span, |
| and she ran |
| her eyes full of glee, |
| a quaint "grand jetes" |
| on the graves |
| of the slaves |
| that once were so free, |
| to the tune of the bloated |
| that cackled and gloated |
| and clapped bloodstained claws |
| at that stadium in Chile |
| that stadium of death. |
| As she swung |
| her mind sung |
| of the gold she would make |
| for the ghouls and the Generals |
| that sealed Chile's fate, |
| and they fed her with caviar |
| with wine and with blood |
| fresh from the graves that |
| their soldiers had dug. |
| Oh she danced and she pranced |
| controlling her breath, |
| her feet caked with blood |
| Dame Margot Fonteyn |
| he dancer of death |
| Ian E Reed |
| Now theirs is the comprehension |
| of the strain and strand of the silky root, |
| and the seed's division. |
| They know |
| the flaws where life broke out, |
| and the secret chemistry which forced fruit from the rock, |
| the disposition forming man, |
| And how the first beat leapt. |
| From earth's fat in slow toil drawn erect, the |
| cause and strength, the single self; |
| from dissolution at the first, to unity, |
| the dispensation was this; |
| from the stillness to the creating realisation |
| in the individual reality. |
| Now for them combine those oppositions, |
| twist, tug, and link, which make the dry bones warm, |
| the grapple and union on the forge of thought. |
| And so on will they flare in the sun's last slide; |
| and in their transmutation, |
| the fullest communication. |
| By their going forth they have had assumption. |
| Keith Lloyd Jones |
| Person with the grace of a tall ship |
| the frame of a humming bird |
| the eyes of a peacock |
| and the voice of the lilac on a warm spring breeze |
| Let the shrouds of what you want to desire be lifted long enough for |
| me to be in your eye a moment, that I might, for that moment, stand as |
| tall as singers and men of property |
| so that I might not be condemned without |
| soul or dignity to the shadows of the gathering dusk as it whispers |
| across the fields cloaking all but the moon in black, |
| and that you might see reality, or me, for that moment. |
| Jimmy Barnes |
| Oh lonely beach so long and flat |
| Glistening the memory of a recent tide, |
| Reflecting the cold blue winter's sky, |
| Deserted forum of summer pleasure, |
| Buckets, spades, freckles and sunburn, |
| Forgotten behind frosty windows. |
| Only I stand on your silken coat, |
| Tasting the salt from icy tears, |
| While the wind moves you always on, |
| Goading your being to restless wandering, |
| I stare at your open face listening for your secrets. |
| But even now wrapped in the same wind, |
| I am only an alien in your deep eternal doings. |
| AM. Horne |
| Having sold his toys, |
| Pleasing 1,000 yelling boys, |
| Removed his scarlet cloak, |
| A ribboned cracker joke, |
| Pulling off a tacky beard, |
| He winced and round he peered, |
| Seeing no one in sight or sound, |
| Thank Christ for that!' he shouted loud. |